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Re: The Aristocrat, The Bandits, The Chalice. Chapter Two
Thanks for your thoughts! I was trying to reference other stories like the magic lamp or that chinese story about the spear and the shield in the start. "A bit ...
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Re: Angel or demon, you’re still vulnerable
They say men are the children of two forces... It's a cute , small story about two different species having children and then those children being great friends. I wonder ...
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Re: The Aristocrat, The Bandits, The Chalice. Chapter One
Thanks so much Raven. There were quite a lot of tips that I've were never really conscious about, looks like there's still much to learn. I feel like currently I'm ...
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Re: The Aristocrat, The Bandits, The Chalice. Chapter One
Thanks for the encouragement, I'm already working on the second part of the story. I found that I'm better at describing things third person, maybe it's the effects of reading ...
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Re: The three biggest lies on the internet
"I'm over 18 years of age." -Looks sideways- -That other guys in my head looks sideways at me- "Uh..." "Well technically I am" "You weren-" "Shh we don't talk about ...
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Re: The Stories And Thoughts Of ADHD(Controversy)
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Re: Wyrdsong Chapter 1.1
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Dec 3, 2024
Edit: Wait... Is this a review...? We were supposed to check the thingy?