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Re: I Have Loved
AUTUMN INK here for a review............... first i have to say i enjoyed the clarity in the expressions of feelings but, there were some instances where it was easy to ...
Apr 23, 2015 -
Re: A Toy's Duty
AutumnINK Here for a review....... rhyming is important in poems and you did that very well that way the reader enjoys the poem more and must continue reading. the dialogues ...
Apr 23, 2015 -
Re: the elevator; in which she falls to peaces
Wow! this is one of the deepest stuff i've read on here, it required me to read it about 3 times with utmost concentration to understand this one. well done ...
Apr 23, 2015 -
Re: A Chance to Win
This poem really had me going at the start then i got confused halfway through it trying to figure what she would win. This stanza is really confusing it talks ...
Apr 23, 2015 -
Re: Like
As simple as this poem is it carries a deeper context about a woman who's madly in love with someone and telling the story of what he does that makes ...
Apr 23, 2015