Autumn

I thought it was pretty good, and I liked the use of repetition I'm not too great with crit but: Why had I come?

thanks for the comments! =D ^.^ I agree with you both about the last sentence, i'll edit it out also lyrical_sunshine I read over the bird & cup bit again ...

cheers for the comments and crit you three ^^ I'll go edit it in a sec. As for the last part.. still not sure I guess I'll leave it there ...