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  • Short Story » General, Horror Re: Blood Red Roses

    Hellur, That was... Wow. So to start with, the beginning was very sweet. As an older sibling myself, I can tell you that you did an amazing job portraying the ...

    Feb 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 31

    ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._.._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. I am not happy. ...

    Feb 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 30

    Hello! I began this review four days ago, and just realized I never finished and submitted it :| So to start with; What. Did. You. Just. Do??? So at first ...

    Feb 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 29

    Hello! I'm back, again... So the friends all hit it off really well, good good good! I say this a lot, but good chapter! This one was quite humorous at ...

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 28

    Hello! I feel like it's been so long since I've last been on, a whole five days ago. Anyway, review time! This chapter was really good, it was funny in ...

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 27

    Hey, I'm back! So in looking through my notifications, I came to the realization that I forgot you had published this chapter. Oops. But I'm here now-did you miss me?- ...

    Feb 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 26

    Hello! *Little happy dance* I love this story you are writing! This chapter was really interesting. We just learned more about Pyrok and that helped to develope her character. Emily ...

    Jan 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: "I Would Kill Myself"

    Hello! This is a really beautiful peice of work. I don't know why I am drawn to poems about suicide and cutting/self harming (maybe cause I do the second one?). ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 1: Did My Teacher Just Call us Turds?

    Hello! This is really good. I will also say here that I've read all the chapters.. So in reading the chapter names, I feel like you have a whole named-like-Percy ...

    Jan 25, 2016
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Narrative Re: God

    Hello. So that was interesting. But I do not think that interesting is quite the right word, maybe intriguing is the word I'm looking for. First off; just as a ...

    Jan 24, 2016
  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: Statue

    That was nothing like anything I have ever read. It was sweet and to an extent simple. You wrote it well, although a couple parts seemed slightly forced. I have ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: i wrote this in the middle of the night

    omw... I have begun to start off my morning by picking a random YWS author and reading all their works. Today you were my pick. I have just found my ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Music is More

    Hello, Annnnd you have summed up feelings and emotions in a unique way that has me smiling and staring off into space. Music is more than anything; it is comfort, ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Could Have Been

    That. Was beautiful. I'm one hundred percent sure that no one is perfect, and yet; many people in the world believe they are. everyone who is not perfect, whoes family ...

    Jan 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: It Was Said Casually! [REVISED]

    Hello! First off, wow. This was pretty interesting, it was funny and well written. You used some pretty descritptive writing and that made it even more interesting. So this whole ...

    Jan 13, 2016


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