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Re: Blood Red Roses
Hellur, That was... Wow. So to start with, the beginning was very sweet. As an older sibling myself, I can tell you that you did an amazing job portraying the ...
Feb 22, 2016 -
Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 31
._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._.._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. ._. I am not happy. ...
Feb 22, 2016 -
Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 30
Hello! I began this review four days ago, and just realized I never finished and submitted it :| So to start with; What. Did. You. Just. Do??? So at first ...
Feb 19, 2016 -
Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 29
Hello! I'm back, again... So the friends all hit it off really well, good good good! I say this a lot, but good chapter! This one was quite humorous at ...
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 28
Hello! I feel like it's been so long since I've last been on, a whole five days ago. Anyway, review time! This chapter was really good, it was funny in ...
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 27
Hey, I'm back! So in looking through my notifications, I came to the realization that I forgot you had published this chapter. Oops. But I'm here now-did you miss me?- ...
Feb 1, 2016 -
Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 26
Hello! *Little happy dance* I love this story you are writing! This chapter was really interesting. We just learned more about Pyrok and that helped to develope her character. Emily ...
Jan 28, 2016 -
Re: "I Would Kill Myself"
Hello! This is a really beautiful peice of work. I don't know why I am drawn to poems about suicide and cutting/self harming (maybe cause I do the second one?). ...
Jan 26, 2016 -
Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 1: Did My Teacher Just Call us Turds?
Hello! This is really good. I will also say here that I've read all the chapters.. So in reading the chapter names, I feel like you have a whole named-like-Percy ...
Jan 25, 2016 -
Re: God
Hello. So that was interesting. But I do not think that interesting is quite the right word, maybe intriguing is the word I'm looking for. First off; just as a ...
Jan 24, 2016 -
Re: Statue
That was nothing like anything I have ever read. It was sweet and to an extent simple. You wrote it well, although a couple parts seemed slightly forced. I have ...
Jan 19, 2016 -
Re: i wrote this in the middle of the night
omw... I have begun to start off my morning by picking a random YWS author and reading all their works. Today you were my pick. I have just found my ...
Jan 19, 2016 -
Re: Music is More
Hello, Annnnd you have summed up feelings and emotions in a unique way that has me smiling and staring off into space. Music is more than anything; it is comfort, ...
Jan 19, 2016 -
Re: Could Have Been
That. Was beautiful. I'm one hundred percent sure that no one is perfect, and yet; many people in the world believe they are. everyone who is not perfect, whoes family ...
Jan 14, 2016 -
Re: It Was Said Casually! [REVISED]
Hello! First off, wow. This was pretty interesting, it was funny and well written. You used some pretty descritptive writing and that made it even more interesting. So this whole ...
Jan 13, 2016
