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Thanks! I never really understood why I wrote this, it started dark, but as I wrote, it changed. I interpret it different everytime I read it, so, I don't really ...

Yeah, she was awake the whole time. This was a one shot, and I think it might be kinda strange, but I like the standoffish element I incorporated. Oh well, ...

Thanks for the pointers, I wrote this in one sitting and wanted to get feedback quickly. I'm a little too impatient sometimes... I'll work on the dialogue and proofread soon!

Perhaps a short story 'should' be more structured than this, but this is a complete, critique ready work if literary measure. Therefore, it meets the qualifications to be posted on ...

No problem friend

Short stories are whatever the writer wants them to be friend.

Thanks for the review!

It was supposed to be humor... was it not?? I don't know... I enjoyed writing it, though it didn't take me long. Thanks for the review, regardless!

Alright, so the point was to paint the picture of someone whose secret was revealed, and it caused them to do something drastic. I see, it was interesting and engaging ...

Thanks!

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Thank you! Sometimes reviews are a bunch of filler, but I feel this one gave me actual things to improve and real advice! Thank you very much!

Woah!! I just realized I'm the first review!! How is that possible? Seriously, this work needs recognition. I pray you get it! *Presses like button*

Thanks for the review! And, yes, there apparentaly was a formatting error, I fixed it. I'll take your advice in hand in future, with details, and possibly edit this one ...

Alright, thanks!!!