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Wow! I was looking to review something but LOVE this so much I'm not sure I have many points to touch on. This story was so creative and simple at ...

You have some great dialogue between characters here. Although the story is not the type that I would usually read, it does seem interesting. The only thing was that it ...

Your creativity is awesome! I see below many people have commented on some minor grammar errors that I also noticed as well, but you were probably writing this quickly since ...

I had to read this twice, it was quite interesting. I really love the first line of contradiction and how you carry it throughout the whole poem. I love poetry ...

This is deeper than you first think when you begin reading it. I really like that you repeated the first lines in the end as well. It rounded out the ...