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Temi, I love the emotions expressed in this :) I also thought the flow and rhythm worked together quite well. My only critique though would be to implement more images ...

Deanie, You've gotten a lot of great reviews already, and I think they've each highlighted different aspects to help with the improvements. I'll try not to repeat anything and give ...

Blue, Don't think I disappeared on you. Slow and steady, right? Right. Okay, so right off the bat, the first sentence is a fragment. Not an okay-let-it-slide fragment, like this ...

Luuuuuumi, I love this piece. I think it's very blues-y, and I'm wondering if the 6/8 refers to a particular time signature (though I'm not all that adept at music, ...

Jane Austen, You have great taste in username ;) Now as for the poem, you expressed worries about it sound self-centered - I find it kind of interesting you thought ...

Noelle, I actually love this poem as a lyrical piece more than a dramatic piece. There were repetitive lines I felt were really interesting, because they sort of help build ...

Liquiddeath, It's a cute little poem for something you quickly made up. The rhyme scheme was pretty soft. I mean, the flow wasn't bad, but the word-choice and the descriptions ...

Michaeld, You've gotten some great reviews already, I agree with a lot of what they say. ^-^ I'll try not to repeat anything. To start with, I do sense the ...

Kafka, I only managed to read SmylinG's review afterward, so there might be a few things I repeated. Ah well. Morning driving on a sun-stung Mexican highway, concrete wisps around ...

Shinda, I like the concept for this poem and I like how there's a powerful voice behind the words. It really gives off this sense of determined conviction which is ...

Flowerchild, Oh, ugh, ehrm. I thought I was morbidly graphic, but these images are pretty up there ^_^ I found myself saying: FINALLY someone who can use imagery effectively

Creativityrules, I like the concept and some of the images, and I can certainly appreciate the emotions behind it, but I agree with Pengu up there. I certainly got the ...

Jessa, I kind of like this, in the sense that I can really get and understand the emotions, there's definitely a connection with the reader here. I also like a ...

Pyro, I appreciate the voice in this, and the raw energy and such. The title is what intrigued me really, because I love me some Myth references, though I would've ...

Mikepyro, You have such a particular style in all of your pieces. It just sounds so natural, almost like a particular flavor. It makes me really enjoy reading your pieces, ...