AudentesFortunaIuvat

I feel like this poem starts off really strong, but it sort of loses steam in the last stanza. With it starting off so powerfully, you should try to do ...

Normally I don't like minimalistic poetry, but the starkness really works here. The alternating format of the stanzas works too. I also like the switch from "I'm alive" to "I'm ...

This is quite a good concept. I really like the hook in the first sentence. Many times, that's how people test stories - if the first sentence can't get them, ...

Oooo, this is so spooky. The rhyme at the beginning really sets the tone of the whole thing. I would consider expanding on this though, adding a bit more detail ...