Attolia

Okay I really like this. I'm going to give you my thoughts on this chapter and the last, so all four sections. First section: short, not much to say. Is ...

Hey, I respect your opinion even though I don't agree with it. We may live in two different parts of America. Yours may be filled with open-minded frugal conservatives who ...

Hahahahahahah. I know we've already talked about this, but - first of all, I'm sorry again to have made you go through all that. And second of all, thank you! ...

Thank you, one and all, for the awesome reviews. Seriously. I feel like I need to explain a bit, especially after sargsauce's review. This is Em's story: Grew up in ...

Coco - Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad to know that you still enjoyed this, without having read the first two, and that you like the characters. And ...

Lauren, Kitty, Skins, Areida, Zankoku - thank you all so, so much! You guys have no idea how helpful your comments have been. I have edited it to use all ...

kingolions - Thank you! "(And this is where someone comes and shoves what I said, into the dirt, and pick on every little thing that I woad wasn't there. But ...

I see you've edited it, to add more about Amy and their relationship and to now quote the dialogue. I thought the extra Amy bit was very effective. It blended ...

EliteHusky - Thanks, yeah I did mean to put "they" I guess it was a typo. And I actually did mean to put prude and "a Bourgeoisie". The capitalization on ...

Areida - thank you so much for this review and the one on my first chapter! Your opinion means a lot. I'm afraid chapter 1 isn't quite as neat and ...

Wow, thanks Snoink! You're like, famous on this site so coming from you that means a lot! :)

Thanks a million!! Yeah I guess I'll just play around with this and probably not have it be the prologue. I was just trying to think of a way to ...

Thank you Baboon and Lauren. Yeah I kind of slacked when writing the fight scene; I put off writing it and the end of the chapter for the longest time, ...

Thank you guys, it's always nice to get more reviews. :) Yeah, haha I guess you could call Adele spoiled. Mostly, though, she's just completely amoral. It's probably not good ...