AtomicSpaceKid

Good rhythm and rhyme. It gives off very Alice In Wonderland vibes to me in the sense that I can imagine the Mad Hatter saying this to himself. I love ...

Thank you. I never took a liking to rhyming poetry and preferred to base my writing loosely off of a ballad type, so I%u2019m glad you were able to appreciate ...

Thank you for the critique, I%u2019m still getting used to the format of everything and I tend to ramble so hopefully I%u2019ll produce more clean poems in the future.

Thank you for your review :) I normally try to format my poems a lot better but like you were saying the way that YWS formats everything makes it hard ...

Good rhythm you’ve got going on. I honestly don’t like rhyming poems but you put so much power and pain into these lines, it was just absolutely enchanting. You painted ...

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Good rhythm you’ve got going on. I honestly don’t like rhyming poems but you put so much power and pain into these lines, it was just absolutely enchanting. You painted ...