Asteria

Hmmm...walking home in a daze would leave a bit to be desired. Perhaps devote the next scene to a full exploration of the beach scene, something more than a quick ...

Scarlet, Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm absolutely ecstatic that you found the imagination and potential within my work! If ever you need anything, or just want ...

Baesch, Thank you for the review. I can see how the lack of answers could be potentially jarring to those, like yourself, that like symmetry. However, despite this being my ...

Shinobithief, Thank you for the review. I'm thrilled that you found its depth to be one you could appreciate, and that you took it to the very place I'd intended ...

Eferhilda, As always, thank you for the review. I'm pleased that you got what I was going for with this piece and hope my next piece lives up to expectations!

Markontheworld, Thank you for taking the time to review my poem! I'm so thrilled that you connected with this as I'd intended it to be received. You read it for ...

Silence, Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad that it spoke to you on such a level and pleased you grasped what I was going for. I hope ...

Renard, Thank you for taking the time to review this poem! I'm pleased that you feel the formatting was creative and that you feel the ambiguity worked; As it was ...

Aley, Thank you for the detailed and thorough review of my work. Where Armydah has already covered faze/phase, I'll focus on the rest of the review. In some of my ...

Hey, Kanome! Thank you so much for the kind review :) If I'm honest, that part of what I wrote is my favorite, too, rhyming wholly unintentional. :P I'll try ...

Yep! It's been since 2009 while I was still with my ex, that I penned my last poem. Thank you! I feel as though I can't say that enough :)

Thank you so much for the wonderful review, Eferhilda! I can't begin to express what it means to me that you understood where I was going with this piece; To ...

Annaclare, I can't even begin to express to you how happy this makes me, to see this review. I was so worried when I wrote this poem, only moments before ...

Alright, will do :)

I'm considering it, actually. If I do, should I let you know so that you can read the revision?