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Hey I enjoyed your work. I could really imagine the scene in my mind. Poor prisoner. Anyway, to my opinion, maybe you could made it more gruesome. Well, Happy Holidays!

Hi, enjoyed reading your work. It was very interesting. However, I think you need to try to add more emotions,well, thats my opinion. Anyway happy holidays!

Hi! Your work had very nice description! Loved the way how you described the feelings. Anyway,can't wait for the next part (is there?) and Happy Holidays!

Hi! I loved your description, it was awesome. However, I quite don't understand about the last part. ANyway good joba nd Happy Holidays!

I'm impressed! So far this is the best work I've read! There were emotions, suspense, dialogue and suspense! What more can I ask? Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep ...

Hi, I enjoyed your worked due to all the suspense you gave. You work had a good start but perhaps you could add in staff other than dialogues. Well, thats ...

Hi, you have a very imaginative mind, but i quite don't understand why the character is very rebellious in the first place. Could you like give a reason why he ...

Hi, I enjoyed your work. It had many action in it but could you try to put more description in your work. Anyway Good Job!