AspiringAuthorA..M.

I think it would be awesome to be Cato. Bad guys are funner to play.

That was evil :evil: But I can't stay mad at you :lol: Never fear, I do indeed have big plans to post a real story on here. You can see ...

Hm, this particular chapter of my book gets praise while others are said to be dull and drag on and on with unnecessary description. Question for readers, what made this ...

I'll post a new chapter soon. Perhaps even today. :wink:

Jurassic Park, a visually revolutionary movie, but the book is just so much more mesmerizing and deep.

Oh my, thank you very much, I do see as that can be a problem. Kind of like: The dog sounded like a dog. :wink:

So I edited this chapter the best I could. It came out of me since I wasn't given anything specific to tweak. *Sigh* Grammar is my enemy. :smt102

I hope I gave the characters enough back story earlier on in the story. Several pieces prior to this one. :)

Hehe, I've been done with my novel for quite a while, but the editing process is painful. Hehe, to make things worse things are getting quite hectic in school at ...

Hehe, that was enjoyable. :smt023

Hehe mysterious ninjas. :lol: I've never read a ninja story so I had no idea that was what was conveyed here. And I named this a parody so mods wouldn't ...

Don't worry Ahmed, I'll be sure and look at your prologue and then this. As of right now, I should get started on my work out. *Will be back for ...

Hm, the fact that only one thing links this to Twilight should I turn this into an original work? :P

I read that book in my ninth year. :P Poor Lenny. :(

Thank you both Durrie and Ben. :P I just did a bit of editing to it based on what Durrie pointed out. I'm sure I didn't catch every one though. ...