AspiringAuthorA..M.

This long piece wasn't supposed to explain everything. ;) After all it's part of my second novel. Sequel to Tears of Fire. :P

Thanks to LittlePetRock there are less moments of wincing for the reader. :wink: Give her a hand. :smt041

*Edited* :smt024

Guess I should make sure the rest of my book is as enjoyable to read as this. Hehe, I write like a mad man, so my writing tends to be ...

It was a reference to the modern cereal brand. Hopefully it wasn't too much. If it is, please, do not hesitate to say so. ;)

Oh, well that changes things up a bit. Comic relief sprinkled in at appreciated moments is perfectly OK. :smt068 :smt027 :smt072

I feel like writing a sequel now.

Thanks. And hehe, I get mixed reviews with the things I do. Sometimes I'm told that my sentences are way too long and that I take forever to get to ...

I'd say you're right, I should go with first person. Because as of the current third person that I made the story one of the biggest things I've been told ...

I have begun a second part but I keep getting side tracked, so I haven't finished it yet. If anybody is interested in seeing this continued just tell me so ...

OK, finally gotten around to using napalm's suggestions. :P

For anybody who likes zombie related things, World War Z is a must read. I completely agree with the high ratings you gave it. Any flaws that the content of ...

Hehe. That made me want to go back into this story and tweak it drastically. Maybe I will. Hehe, I appreciate you going through the trouble of searching through the ...

Thank you very much. Yes, I do tend to let obvious mistakes pass below my notice whenever I go on a writing craze. I'll be sure and address those errors. ...

Indeed, it is a very good zombie book. I loved every minute of it. The style that it was written in was so easy to devour. As gruesome as it ...