AspiringAuthorA..M.

I see Under The Dome every time I go to the local library. But I have never gotten the habit of checking it out.

After many months, and some of the com mentors no longer members of the YWS, I added the second bit to this part of my book. It's sad really, the ...

I just added a shark to the story. I'm still wondering what land animal I should use. Suggestions are welcome. :P

Once again, updated. The large spaces between the text was not intentional. I'm not sure why that happened.

Once again, tweaked.

Bah, bloody teenagers these days. I never talked like them. But I guess I should tone down the speech anyway. :) Oh, as for the sidekick's name, I had to ...

*Little off detail that reviewer pointed out was addressed* :P

Don't feel ashamed. :) I read the first few sentences, and stopped. The old style of writing just didn't appeal to me. :)

Oh hehe, I was kind of hoping I wouldn't have to be so graphic when it came to that. That's why I sort of just left those details small. But ...

No input? And hm, theres really no language here, and nothing rerally over the top. So I guess this could sort of be just rated 16, huh?

Bah, all description? I'm trying to figure out what that means. Forgive me classy, but I'm gonna have to use your smilie, :smt101 As far as I know, most books ...

Wow, the fellow was brutal even in his youth. :)

Thank you so much. :) And hehe, I used, "gooey" because it is a little girl narrating who does not have an extensive vocabulary. ;) But if it is still ...

Yes, they are real Israeli names. Oh yeah, you didn't tell me anything about the other characters. I'm not sure what should be addressed about them, but I went ahead ...

Thank you so much people. :) The piece you read was the first story I had written in years. It had been lying dormant on my computer, so I decided ...