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Re: Fuchsia Fur, Blue Seers
It's good so far. Just a few things: -"Gentle breezes, Flowing Fuchsia" the word flowing shouldn't be capitalized -This is probably just me but make the poem longer I could ...
Jan 14, 2013 -
Re: The Greys and The Greens
The English part of it was great. But I'm wondering what is the plot the poem? Good writing so far but I'm a bit lost when it comes to the ...
Jan 11, 2013 -
Re: What did we mean?
Overall it was really good. I could feel the emotion behind the words you wrote. Keep writing.
Jan 11, 2013