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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mother

    You should have these in stanzas if you're meaning this to be an actual poem. OR also known as poem paragraphs. As well as, proper placing of periods, and commas. ...

    Apr 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Capture

    So, I'm only commenting on this so I can earn points. So, sorry. But, all-in-all I rather like this poem. It actually paints a picture in my mind unlike half ...

    Apr 26, 2013


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