Ashkitten83

Thanks for the positive comments, and yes the grammar was horrendous because I was doing it from a phone. I have made some adjustments so let me know if you ...

Thank you so very much! I appreciate such positive comments. It really made me smile. :)

Really cute, and funny. When my son found out that Avery had a double he said "Uh Oh!!!" With a big smile on his face. Lol Me and my son ...

My son liked it, but he asked what happened to his jar of sentient sneeze? We are about to read chapter 3 now.

No i meant im glad u paid attention to the details of what works and what doesnt

Thank you so much for taking your time to read this, (despite its length) and all your positive words In your review.

Wow. So mich for me to work on :) i really appreciate the fact that u ripped apart my short story, and im not being sarcastic either. I want this ...

You are so very welcome! I really enjoyed reading it!

Thanks dear friend! I really appreciate the comment. I rated it a 16 rating because its definitely not for children, but it has a fairy tale feel to it. I ...

Brilliant! I love this. i love the title and how you chose not to capitalize the title as part of the effect. Its really a well thought out poem. I ...

I agree, I find the best way to do this is with a thesaurus. as writers, we are weavers of words, it's up to us to choose the perfect words ...

Wow, thank you Reet for a very uplifting review. I really appreciate the positive feedback. :)

Thank you so much for such a great review. I really appreciate you taking the time to read it and review it.

Wow, thanks so much. I'm so happy to have had so many positive comments about this poem. I no longer cut, though the thoughts are still there (and probably always ...

Thank you so much for reading my poem and for giving me such a pleasant review. :)