Ashitaka

Hi,forgive my late reply.Fella i took to consideration your tips of I preceeded on editing the story. Kudos:)

Hi, thanks for the comment :) It helps me to improve my self.

Hi Friend, I see you've wrote a poem that gives us your firm desire for love and stability in life. No more the ups and downs, no more with something ...

A Cute Poem, "My feelings need to Process" "but step by step ithink we'll grow" You're really Good:)

Pretty Good way you convey the emotions of a man who's in Love,yet he doesn't know how to tell her.And there's the fear of rejectionI resonate,I relate with you. Way ...

I just know from the stores told by my mother how it is to Achieve so many,in dedline.She shared them with it's a Story i relate with. Keep it Up:)

Very Good,Insightful list of things to know.From Now On I'm keeping them in my Mind. Kudos:)

Hi. The first paragrpah really hits hard,cause it makes sound life(the great Gift)sour. I like how you carefully use Descriptive language.And the girl sees how her life on Earth ended,now ...

So you'ld lie to be unravell mysteries,and being a Savior. Great song:)

Interesting your conveys the dsire of being really able to fly aywhere you'ld want to. Kudos:)

Hi,Good Day All The Day. My isekai story is one on progress, it's the Boy Meets The Mystery Girl. I'll work more on it, plus I'm considering to share ot ...