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Re: THEM- Chapter one
Greetings. Well, as said before, the situation there is something one can really connect to, since it isn't very diffrent from when I am on a bus trip with my ...
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: City of Ashes
Greetings there. First of all, I admire you for your dreams. I wish I had dreams only half as cool as that. Most of the time I don't dream anyway ...
Nov 19, 2007 -
Re: heaven and earth: Betrayal- Ch. 1 Fate Comes to Call prt1
Well, better late than never; I'm going to comment on this now. I'm not professional at it, but I'm straightly going to tell what I think of it. First of ...
Nov 4, 2007 -
Re: So Much for Magicians
Well, most critique about what should be improved has already been given, or in other words, I see nothing to add there, since it was already mentioned. So why do ...
Nov 1, 2007 -
Re: Heaven and Earth Book1 Betrayal:Prolouge-What Comes Your Way
Alright. Now, this is pretty interesting indeed. The plot appears to be quite interesting, although we just get to know the spire of a whole iceberg it seems. A thing ...
Oct 21, 2007 -
Re: Oceania Cross, Chapter two: A Dark Priestess
I've just read this and part 1 of the story, and I find it interesting because I have kind of no idea at all where this is leading to. Part ...
Oct 8, 2007
