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Re: Life as a Leaf
Thank you!
Tue Sep 27, 2016 11:43 am -
Re: Emily and That One Time She Had Ice Cream With Satan
Thank you!!
Mon Sep 26, 2016 4:27 pm -
Re: Life as a Leaf
Thank you!
Fri Sep 23, 2016 2:18 am -
Re: Life as a Leaf
Thank you!
Fri Sep 23, 2016 2:18 am -
Re: Web Life
Thank you!
Wed Sep 21, 2016 1:36 pm -
Re: Emily and That One Time She Had Ice Cream With Satan
Thank you for the input!
Wed Sep 21, 2016 2:19 am -
Re: Web Life
Thank you so much! I'm sorry I missed those simple mistakes! I'm so embarassed! Thank you for your review. By the way, the reason I named him Tony was because ...
Wed Sep 21, 2016 1:47 am -
Re: Web Life
Thank you so much! I will fix the errors I made. Sorry I made so many! I get a lot of comments about how my writing isn't detailed. I know ...
Wed Sep 21, 2016 1:44 am -
Re: Emily and That One Time She Had Ice Cream With Satan
Hey! Thanks for the review. I fixed the capitalization issues and the hyphen issue. I really appreciate you liking this. I know it is short, but that was the way ...
Wed Sep 21, 2016 1:41 am -
Re: Emily and That One Time She Had Ice Cream With Satan
Thanks for the feedback! I know that it is short. I kind of like it that way. I didn't want this story to very very long at all. I know ...
Wed Sep 21, 2016 1:39 am -
Re: Leaving a Spark
Thank you. Could you tell me where the tense changes? I know I struggle with this but it would be great if you could point out where. Thank you so ...
Wed May 04, 2016 12:35 pm -
Re: Guilt is the Source of Sorrows
Its kind of like... He is talking to his diary like it is listening while he remembers everything. I base a lot of his entries off of the way I ...
Sat Apr 30, 2016 7:55 pm -
Re: Guilt is the Source of Sorrows
Thanks. I really did. I'm glad you see that.
Sat Apr 30, 2016 7:52 pm -
Re: Leaving a Spark
Thank you so much! This means so much to me!
Sat Apr 30, 2016 12:57 am -
Re: Leaving a Spark
I think I may have fixed the problems. Thanks again!
Fri Apr 29, 2016 9:29 pm