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Re: Finis. Exit.
I like it! Its interesting and deep. It doesn't quite feel like poetry to me though, more like lyric prose. But of course that's just me. =)
May 31, 2010 -
Re: the withering flower
This is very pretty. Its not exactly epic, but definitely quote-worthy. ;) I like the picture this poem creates, but I do whish it were a bit longer.
May 30, 2010 -
Re: Dear Lord 1
I love this! Its a beautiful prayer, and poem in general. If you write many of these you could try putting together a devotional/prayer book and maybe even publishing it. ...
May 30, 2010 -
Re: Upon Seeing a Photograph of the Parthenon
Is 'WOW!' enough of a review?? haha No, seriously. I have absolutely no idea how to review poetry--well, for the most part--so I'll just go ahead and say from a ...
May 29, 2010 -
Re: Daniel's Way-Chapter 1- (Critiques Welcome)
Thank you so much for the reviews everyone! I haven't been on in over a year so I'm still getting used to things. Bear with me, please. I'm going to ...
May 26, 2010 -
Re: Daniel's Way-Chapter 2-(Critiques Needed!)
Thanks, GenShawklan! I'm glad you liked it. =)I'll be sure and check that out very soon.
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Magic
I love this! There's pretty much nothing I would change. It flows very nicely and is an interesting piece. Great job!
May 24, 2010 -
Re: Daniel's Way-Chapter 2-(Critiques Needed!)
Thanks, Junglelover! Your critiques help alot. =) I'll be keeping them in mind as I revise this.
May 23, 2010