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Arwen

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Beat the Odds?

    Hello! I think you wrote a wonderful poem. It has a nice rhythm and the flow of words makes the reader sympathize with the one who's telling and living the ...

    Aug 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Do You Remember the Garden?

    Hello! I think this is the start of a truly beautiful piece, especially the first three (or two) stanzas left me breathless. The wind 'tucking the world to bed' and ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Self-Portrait

    Hello there! I liked your poem because it's somewhat original and it has the nice concept of defining yourself through contrasts: 'not a nose, not a zit, or scar. Just ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Raw

    Hello! I enjoyed your poem as it seems playful and witty at the same time, and the circular structure brings a nice effect to the reader, leading him to the ...

    Aug 26, 2011


I think that was when I began to realize that reputation isn't everything. I should focus less about how others perceive me and more about what makes me happy. Because, in the end, I have to live with myself.
— Seraphina