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Re: Beat the Odds?
Hello! I think you wrote a wonderful poem. It has a nice rhythm and the flow of words makes the reader sympathize with the one who's telling and living the ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Do You Remember the Garden?
Hello! I think this is the start of a truly beautiful piece, especially the first three (or two) stanzas left me breathless. The wind 'tucking the world to bed' and ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Self-Portrait
Hello there! I liked your poem because it's somewhat original and it has the nice concept of defining yourself through contrasts: 'not a nose, not a zit, or scar. Just ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Raw
Hello! I enjoyed your poem as it seems playful and witty at the same time, and the circular structure brings a nice effect to the reader, leading him to the ...
Aug 26, 2011
