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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Ship's Mechanic (Part 1/2)

    Like a fool I posted my review as a response to Oxara's review. First time posting a review in...9 years? I went and read the other reviews and clicked reply ...

    Oct 30, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Recommendation Thread

    The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss. You want a good read? This book is the KING of all books and my now all time favorite, and I read ...

    Oct 10, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Amazing Books

    The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss . Best book ever written, best book ever read. For fantasy lovers I guarantee this or your time back!! (Or something of ...

    Oct 10, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Otherworld - Prologue (part 1)

    I agree with TheNewHero. It's a good start and it has a hook, but it wasn't quite prominent enough for me to really feel like I want to continue reading. ...

    Oct 9, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Ballad of the Blood (1)

    Sounds great! Reminded me a little bit of lord of the rings to be honest, when they are in the Mines of Moria adn they find Gimli's couin. (Although I ...

    Oct 9, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Old Man

    I enjoyed this despite it not being my normal genre. (As you know I expect :) ) The Chink is a nice addition as it gives the reader knowledge of ...

    Oct 8, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: What He Came For (chapter one)

    The best part is how intense it is. Personally I also like where this piece seems to be steering, with My friends and family would never look at me the ...

    Oct 8, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Miracles

    The best thing about your story is its uniqueness. I haven't read anything quite like this. Also the voice, or, Melany speaking to 'it' (whatever it was) was great, very ...

    Oct 8, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Half-Vampire (No love involved =P) - Quite Violent

    Interesting. I also noticed the Darren Shan references. Enjoyed it and I like this kind of story. Quite a few grammatical errors but mostly fine. I think you should read ...

    Oct 7, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Witchcraft Love (Rated R, seriously)

    The reviewer above makes many good points and looks to have solid nitpicks except for some things such as the irony they didn't get, I see as quite clear. Also ...

    Sep 28, 2009
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Traitors - 40K Warhammer

    I enjoyed this despite the lack of action and i really hope that the scientists end up as Space Marines of different sorts or something as that would just be ...

    Sep 25, 2009
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Virus - 1

    I can see others point of view about the hook thing, but i am leaning towards that the idea of Cara being a carrier of the virus is the hook. ...

    Sep 25, 2009
  • Script » General, General Re: deleated

    Lol ouchhhh. I hope this isn't based on true thoughts and anecdotes because If so that Trevor guy just reinforces a bad image. Although, i won't lie, it's not entirely ...

    Sep 24, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Little Macey

    That's pretty creepy but i like it :D. Just something i noticed is the repetition of a few things like grey in A grey hand, with crinkled, old fingernails – ...

    Sep 24, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hollow writings

    Heyyyyy. Pretty awesome, completely different to my CR IRL. Anyway just a few things i noticed. An ancient tome lies open before me, is followed by within the tome before ...

    Sep 22, 2009


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