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Re: Ship's Mechanic (Part 1/2)
Like a fool I posted my review as a response to Oxara's review. First time posting a review in...9 years? I went and read the other reviews and clicked reply ...
Oct 30, 2018 -
Re: The Recommendation Thread
The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss. You want a good read? This book is the KING of all books and my now all time favorite, and I read ...
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: Amazing Books
The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss . Best book ever written, best book ever read. For fantasy lovers I guarantee this or your time back!! (Or something of ...
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: Otherworld - Prologue (part 1)
I agree with TheNewHero. It's a good start and it has a hook, but it wasn't quite prominent enough for me to really feel like I want to continue reading. ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: Ballad of the Blood (1)
Sounds great! Reminded me a little bit of lord of the rings to be honest, when they are in the Mines of Moria adn they find Gimli's couin. (Although I ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: The Old Man
I enjoyed this despite it not being my normal genre. (As you know I expect :) ) The Chink is a nice addition as it gives the reader knowledge of ...
Oct 8, 2009 -
Re: What He Came For (chapter one)
The best part is how intense it is. Personally I also like where this piece seems to be steering, with My friends and family would never look at me the ...
Oct 8, 2009 -
Re: Miracles
The best thing about your story is its uniqueness. I haven't read anything quite like this. Also the voice, or, Melany speaking to 'it' (whatever it was) was great, very ...
Oct 8, 2009 -
Re: The Half-Vampire (No love involved =P) - Quite Violent
Interesting. I also noticed the Darren Shan references. Enjoyed it and I like this kind of story. Quite a few grammatical errors but mostly fine. I think you should read ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: Witchcraft Love (Rated R, seriously)
The reviewer above makes many good points and looks to have solid nitpicks except for some things such as the irony they didn't get, I see as quite clear. Also ...
Sep 28, 2009 -
Re: Traitors - 40K Warhammer
I enjoyed this despite the lack of action and i really hope that the scientists end up as Space Marines of different sorts or something as that would just be ...
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: The Virus - 1
I can see others point of view about the hook thing, but i am leaning towards that the idea of Cara being a carrier of the virus is the hook. ...
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: deleated
Lol ouchhhh. I hope this isn't based on true thoughts and anecdotes because If so that Trevor guy just reinforces a bad image. Although, i won't lie, it's not entirely ...
Sep 24, 2009 -
Re: Little Macey
That's pretty creepy but i like it :D. Just something i noticed is the repetition of a few things like grey in A grey hand, with crinkled, old fingernails – ...
Sep 24, 2009 -
Re: Hollow writings
Heyyyyy. Pretty awesome, completely different to my CR IRL. Anyway just a few things i noticed. An ancient tome lies open before me, is followed by within the tome before ...
Sep 22, 2009
