Armydah

Thanks ! >_

Hi Thanks for the review. And thanks for helping me with the last three lines. I made "The way he comes alive, the way I come alive" two separate lines ...

Hi Aley, Thanks for the review of my work. I never actually thought of the Iambic Pentameter so I didn't bother working it into the poem. Thanks for pointing that ...

Hi Retro, Thanks for the review of my work, and for pointing out the part about "Cause surely he sees the gash in the skies." I would make sure to ...

Wow, i really liked this poem. The way you wrote it and also the message it contains. Just beautiful