Aritra

Hi, thank you very much. If you have time, can you please drop by and give some review on the second and third chapters. Thanks,

Thank you very much for the review. Well, I know that the classes part is boring, but believe me they are relevent. Actually, the most important part of this chapter ...

I absolutely agree with you. Being a great fan of HP, some of its influence unconsciously poured onto my writing. Though the plots are absolutely different. I tried to free ...

Thanks for the review. Actually, though Alyssa's father is busy., he get some time to spend with her daughter. I will clarify in the fourth chapter how Alyssa realised that ...

Thanks for the review. I see that you raised many questions. It is an early draft, I can flesh it out properly later. I will now try to answer the ...

I drive through the storm. Marty’s worn tires coast over slick bridges while the water laps at the edges of the road. DMV says It takes six inches to float ...

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it was dark after you died, and you were a dog. the floor was wet and the room was empty. your nose was wet and your belly was empty. I ...

Well, a good attempt you have made. But, I will try to suggest one thing. While, writing a poem try to be more concrete and concise. Flowery language is useful ...