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Re: The Kiss
"I've never been happier , " she whispered. The period should be a comma. and lean in for the kiss also as well It sounds akward... lean in for the ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: I Guess Ive Only Got Myself To Blame...
It was amazing, but a couple of errors. It sure wasn ' t easy love BE SURE TO CAPITALIZE ANY I's THAT STAND ALONE Like if you and I would ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: i'll find my way again
You have very good imagery, I love that! She hated anything that reminded her of who she was , because her tongue used to sting, it was the kind of ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Nameless - 2
I like this plot you have going. Theblacksheep pointed out basicly what I saw, but I love your plot. You said second well I should get reading on the first ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Sentences
This was random, yet you made a point. I like it. You could have taught a class with this. :D It was a great idea! It is so true there ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Scars: Part 5
You did it again! Wonderful! The end of the chapter was sad. :( I love that you showed us she was devistated. It made me even more sad when she ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Scars: Part 3
It is clear you have talent. You DO derserve a pat on the back. I never been intersted in to things like this even in my own writing I did ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Hunted
Congradulations!!!!! won first prize! I could see why! This is magnificient! I love how you describe the details of the wolves! I loved it. You deseved the first prize. I ...
Jul 19, 2011