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Hey there MamaLama! English assignments gone rogue are the best kinds, in my opinion. Half the time they end up being a lot more interesting and well-written than your best ...

Hello there Miss Ellie Bryn :) I was really excited when I read the synopsis on your novel page; ever since I read Alice Sebold's The Lovely Bones , I've ...

Hey Pixie! So you've got some great ideas floating around here, but what you really need is some work on the execution of those ideas. Here are my main suggestions: ...

Hey Bhayden - You've already gotten some really good, specific feedback above, so I'll just add that I think it would help a lot for you to really think about ...

Hey Lumi - The last thing I am is a poetry expert, so take these comments with a grain of salt. I'm not really sure what you're going for here. ...

Hey Veritas! So - definitely a controversial piece you've got going here. Unfortunately, I don't feel like your style does justice to the big topic you've decided to tackle. When ...

He's a bad boy. It makes for a good story, at least! I'm with you, though - if it came to a choice between the creepy Phantom in the basement ...

Awww, I really liked this! Normally I'm not a huge fan of poetry - I either have to be in the right mood to read the right piece at the ...

'Rina! I hate you for not finishing this yet! You're a dirty, dirty liar and I wish all kinds of awful things upon you until you finish this, pronto stat ...

Hey there Dragongirl - I think someone else already mentioned it, but I highly agree that you should change up your spacing to make each of your stanzas four lines ...

Hey lovelyheart - I just did a review on your first chapter, so I figured I'd stop in and check out the second one to see how things progressed here. ...

Hey there lovelyheart - So here's my thing. You say in your description of this novel that it's about a girl dealing with her parents' divorce and finding love and ...

Hi there, No need to apologize for working with material that isn't all sunshine and happiness - poetry is a great place to work through life's darkest corners, to figure ...

Overall - loved it. I thought your sense of detail and pacing were both spot-on. Because it was so good, however, I have just a few little nit-picks for you ...

Hi Jessa! So I guess from your note at the bottom and all the congratulations that you're getting married - so congratulations! That's a big deal; I wish you well. ...