ArcticMonkey

Hiya, Lord, here as requested :D I'll start off with what I liked, and I agree that the contrast between the beginning at the end is really good because I ...

Hey again! I can definitely say I preferred this to your other short story, this might be because I love stories about dreams, but I still think that this one ...

Hi Andy, sorry it took me so long! Okay, so I think you did a good job in building up a really exciting scene full of drama. The fighting bit ...

Hey unknown! So I read the rules of this competition after I read this piece, so I had to reconsider a few of the points I was going to say. ...

Hi! So what I liked about this is that the use of repetition is really effective in conveying how you feel, by repeating things, it emphasises how hurt the narrator ...

Hiya, Dream! What I liked about this poem is that the subject matter is something relatable, I mean everyone reading this poem is living... lol. Okay, that sounds weird, but ...

Hello! I'm going to jump straight in with what I liked about this story. Well, it was pretty dark, and you managed to create a fairly morbid and dark atmosphere ...

Hey, lakegirls! Here to review~ Right I'll start off with what I liked- aaaah tense! This prologue was really tense and it built up a rather suspenseful and chilling atmosphere ...

Hey Milan! Here to review :} Firstly, I haven't done a poetry review in ages, but I'll try my best to review this for you. I'll start off with my ...

Hi annardj! I'll start off with what I liked about this piece- the first two sentences were really cool. I don't know, there's just something about the idea of time ...

Hiya, Tia! Here to review~ Okay, so I'll start off with what I liked about this piece. The fact that it showed a strong kind of girl was good, and ...

Hey Witty (love your username)- here to review your story! So I agree with eorchard in saying that this seems like quite a fun story so far, and it's nice ...

Hiya Willow! I'll start off my review with what I liked. This story really reminds me of this story I wrote when I was younger about cats, and the perspective ...

Hi Serene! So, I'll start off with review with what I liked. As Summer is coming really soon it made me feel all excited. It generally had a nice and ...

Hey Kiss! Here to review your story :) Okay, so sort of in reply to Aux's point, nice people are often put down by others for no apparent reason. Because ...