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Re: The Animal princess (1)
Hello, This story was cool. I liked the character and the introduction. When the speech came, there were no stops, you maybe coulve added in some parts 'she said quietly' ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: The Elemental Guardian - Chapter1
Hello, I enjoyed this piece very much. Madika is really cool, you explained his characteristics nicely. Although, I hope in your next chapters, you write more about him. I know ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: The Best Book Ever Read
Ok, I don't really have an exact order for these books, because i just can't choose!! However, these are my all time favourites: Of Mice And Men Alice In Wonderland ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: I'm dreaming of a world
Hello, I think this poem seemed very thought-out even though you did it in two minutes. It reminded me of that song 'Imagine' by John Lennon. Your imaginationn is great! ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: The Myth of the Panda
Hello, I enjoyed this piece very much! Your creativity is excellent, and this worked well for a short story. It's cool how you used Greek Gods like Zeus and Poseidon. ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: One Man's Prison
I think you have a very poetic way of writing, I like how you carefully picked your words as these were very detailed. :D I hope you continue, and WELL ...
Jan 9, 2010