ArcticMonkey

This is my first story on YWS so PLEASE tell me what you think, and I don't mind harsh edits (it makes me a better writer). And also I was ...

Hiya, retro, here to review as requested! It seems that the others have done the nitpicks, so I won't include that in my review. There are a lot of commas ...

Hey, here to review as requested! :D OVERALL IMPRESSION: The opening paragraph was quite capturing, and the flow was most of the time, excellent. You paced it well, and the ...

Hi Rae! I'm so sorry I didn't get to this sooner. It seems that Kiwi has said most of what I was going to say. I did think that the ...

Hello Sporky, here to review as reqested! :) I’m glad that you’ve posted something in the poetry section that could have been hiding for quite a while. I feel that ...

Hiya Shubhi!Here as requested! 8) First of, I would like to say that I won't be nitpicking on specific grammar, but I'll mention it later on in the review. :) ...

Hiya 97! here to Review! Overall Impression When I first read this I thought that it shouldn’t really be a short story, unless you thought of lengthening it more. I ...

Hello Jas, here to review!Sorry this took so long! :) Overall Impression: Excellent! It really did keep me going through the whole thing. I liked your use of dialogue, and ...

Heya there,Sakin! I'm back! Overall Impression: I prefer this one to the last one, mimicking Esther in saying that it was better paced. I thought that I got to know ...

Heya there Sakin! I'm so glad you asked me to review this, its was a very good read! Overall Impression Well the first part of the story didn't reflect to ...

Heya Rachel, here to review as requested!! Let me start by saying that this piece was wonderful, in the sense that the imagery was so clear to understand. It's quite ...

Heya there, WW! Here to review as requested!! Overall Impression: I have read the previous two chapters and I agree with a lot of others in saying that it is ...

Hey the screamandshout. Here to review as requested! The beginning is quite capturing as you didn’t reveal too much of the story and it leaves you thinking: what is she ...

Heya pinkangel! Here to review as requested! This poem made me feel like too many people are hiding things, and that they should just come out. I could also feel ...

Hey there again! I thought that this was much better than last time, although you didn't rally sort out that comma thing. It's ok for now :wink: This new side ...