ArcticMonkey

Here to review again! :) Fist off, a quick overview of plot and character. This chapter had definately said a lot more about the story and I've learnt lots more. ...

Here to review per request. 8) Did you get the title from the song by Ludacris feat. someone else? Just wondering. Anyhow, lets get on with the depths of the ...

Hey! Here to review as requested! I was actually going to do this last night then my mum told me to get off the computer or my eyes would pop ...

Retro! Here to review as requested. First of all, shouldn’t this be in Fan-fiction seeing as you’re talking about the Wizard of Oz by L.F.Baum. Anyhoo, On with the review! ...

Hiya Booky! Here to review as requested! First of all, I'd like to point out that I'm not very good when it comes to Non-Fiction reviews, so if you don't ...

Alright Skinsy, bare in mind those reviews that you saw was when I was a little bit cu-koo, so this one probably won't be that good. Especially since you have ...

Yo, Ben! Here to review. Yaaaaay 8) I'm not very good a reviewing prologues, but I shall try my best. I think that yuo're main strength would be drawing people ...

psudiname! I am going to follow this novel! PM me with chapter 6, or reqyest on my WRFF thread or wahtever! Okay, on with the review. :) EXCITING! I think ...

Psudiname! I'm back, mwahahaahhaha First off, I'd like to point out that you've yet to make this into a novel on YWS. Nate has a video about it here , ...

Hey. It's me again! Nitpicks and suggestions in the spoiler, as always! Caleb could not ever remember ever being this happy. His whole body was permeated with a n euphoria ...

Hey, here to review again! Overall Impression: I don’t think I’ll need a Spoiler this time because I didn’t notice any grammar issues, well done! However, I know that grammar ...

Here to review as requested! Hey 8) Overall Impression: You’ve paced this quite well, the beginning is a bit bland, however your ending is quite exciting. The characters are quite ...

Hey, WaitingForLife! Here to review as requested :) Overall Impression: I like your beginning, just describing Lizzy, and as for your end you could’ve used more of a cliff hanger ...

Hello Gomer! You're relatively new. I hope you're enjoying the site! Anyway, on with the review. First off, I think this piece belongs in the 'Other' section. I can see ...

Tweenie here to review as requested! Overall: I think that it flowed quite well, although sometimes it just didn’t seem very natural. Your grammar and spelling is generally great and ...