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BOMB DISPOSAL

I don't hate you. ;)

into the future*

I guess I just know big words lol. I don't use a thesaurus! The "There in my bed I do lie" was originally "There in my bed as I lie", ...

I am shaking my head, mostly disappointed but I can't help but feel a tinge of, perhaps misplaced, admiration.

Thank you! I am very glad you liked this chapter because I was starting to wonder if maybe I needed to post more of it to allow people the feel ...

I know I know, it's just the whole conkers thing is very important. I'm surprised i didn't refer to it at least once as a conker tree, I shall put ...

I don't know how far in you've read the story but there's a mask that Adam discovers from the ocean at some point. You can't really tell from the four ...

I don't know how far in you've read the story but there's a mask that Adam discovers from the ocean at some point. You can't really tell from the four ...

Actually the tree being a horse-chestnut tree is very important, I appreciate your review but please don't tell me to simplify my work because you don't understand something, lol. Horse-chestnut ...

Thank you all for your help, I have split the work up into the four chapters I had posted and will now delete this post.

Sorry, I'm new here (well I'm a returned writer) and I didn't really know how to go about that.