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This was very poignant and beautifully written. If I were you, I'd make sure to save this in the future as a writing sample, although you may need to shorten ...

I'm guessing you're reading Grendel by John Gardner now? I hated that book! The entire point of Beowulf is that it's a good versus evil story. Grendel is supposed to ...

An interesting premise; it's almost dream-like in a way. Anyways, I think this a very good chapter and I look forward to reading more of your work. As you continue ...

Very interesting! I might have to check out those books. I think this article does a very good job of conveying the information in a very quick and readable manner. ...

I think you do a very good job for setting the scene of the story and drawing the reader in. The first paragraph is descriptive enough that it gives the ...

It's an interesting premise for a poem, but it sounds broken in many places. Take your first stanza: What a stingy smell of humidity and sweat, forming around my head ...

I'm jumping in at the third chapter, so part of my confusion may be related to having not read the previous two chapters, but I found this hard to follow. ...