Aravis10

Thank you for your reviews! They are helpful and encouraging, but they don't glaze over things that need fixed. How did you learn to review like this? What is your ...

You have given me some really good ideas on how to improve this. Thank you!

Woah! That's what you imagined! Crazy how different minds work!

She has changed a lot from the girl in the last chapter. What you said about that portion of dialogue makes sense. I will change it when I get to ...

Wait! Who thought it was boring? Anyways, thank you for your review! Well, she is supposed to marry the Pharaoh's son who is the Pharaoh to be. Does that make ...

Yes, everyone has said that this chapter is rushed. I will try to expand this and maybe talk more about Fenuku's involvement in her childhood. I can't wait to get ...

Thank you! I will try to make the beginning more interesting!

I picture Benjamin as an average junior high boy. But, each to his own imagination. I believe that eyes do smile. For example, maybe I'm not smiling with my face, ...

Thank for the reviews! The Hivites were a people group that Simeon and Levi murdered. I wanted it to be cryptic since Asenath would not know who they were either, ...

Don't worry bout it! Vacation is more important than my story. ;) Yeah, I know that wasn't the best start. I'll try to rework that. Thanks for your awesome reviews!!!

Oops. I'll try to fix the confusion about the point in time. Thanks for pointing that out! In reference to one of your questions, is he dead? Good question. ;)

Oh! Another place where my chapter break up thing came out when I copied it to the website. Be forwarned. This happens to me all the time. So watch out ...

Thank you Jessie!

Oh! I am so sorry that there were so many silly mistakes. I'll try to catch those so you don't have to. I like how you rewrote that part. When ...

"Three questions." That's what I meant. Ug. I did the bold thing again! I've been trying to catch it before I post it. Sorry that you have to keep reminding ...