Aravis10

Woah. This was a while ago. I'm sorry that I am just now getting back to you. Thank you so much for your detailed reviews! They are very helpful!

Thank you Sillia! I have been working on description as I have been writing later chapters. The hardest part is finding the right balance. Too much bogs a book down, ...

Hello people! I am back for a few days! Yay! Anyways.....see that weird line after like the first few sentences? I know it needs something there, but I'm not sure ...

Yes ma'am. I will post when I get back from vacation. My story is at home.

Yes, his sister's name is weird but that was actually senusret 2 actually wife's name. I would never have thought that up!

I like both types, but I like this type a little more. You are too kind. *blushes* I would love to be a best selling author but my biggest dream ...

Thank you so much! Even though you are on the enemy team.... ;) wow! you really have knocked out the reviews today!

Thank you so much! It is so good to get a different opinion! I struggle with balance in description, most of the time it is either too much or not ...

Oh good. I was afraid that you had given up!

Hi Buggiedude! I have been keeping up with this story and I want to know... where is the rest of it? What happens? You can't leave me hanging like this!

Oh, it is actually dragonfphoenix

I'm sure it would be a little confusing without reading the other chapters. But thanks for taking the time to review!

I see what you mean, and I can definitely fix that. Thanks for sticking with me!

That is cool! Thanks!

Ug. Everyone has said something about the Oni/Asenath dialogue. That probably means that I need to change it. Yeah, when I read the tow side thing out loud to Abi, ...