AquaMarine

Sorry this is later than expected, it's been saved in my drafts for a while ... Why oh why am I hated? Is it my straight talking attitude? Is it ...

Hello! I read over your first chapter, so no worries there. “…At midnight last night, a horrendous murder has befouled the Industrial Parks of Gallagher.” Watch your tenses! would lead ...

Hi, Flower. Here as requested. You've managed to get a lot of emotion into this poem, which is great. There is life in it, which does make it an interesting ...

Hi there! This is my first review in a while so please do bear with me... I stared at the girl in the mirror, she didn’t look any different. She ...

Hey there! I really enjoyed this story - it was humorous, and you dealt with an odd topic choice well and in a quirky way. One thing that did bother ...

Hi there. Be still, heart of taken, pulsing sin – No more do tears of blood atone. That dreary toast! as hellish haunts do Raise to sneering lips their cups ...

Hi there! It's a nice, sweet whimsical idea for a poem. Some of the ideas you have in here are good, and with some refinement you could be on your ...

Hey, Jag! So, I told you that I find this hard to review and I do. Your writing, to me, seems seamless when you read it at first. The whole ...

Hello! Okay, so I like the topic of the poem. Nicely chosen. However, throughout the poem I didn't feel like you executed it well enough to live up to the ...

Hello! To me, this poem feels very lacking at the moment. It's got the basic idea down, but there is a lot ore that needs to be added before it's ...

Hello! This poem feels very raw, which means that the emotion comes off it very strongly. Whilst in some cases this is a very good thing, I think here you ...

Hello! Well, everyone has pointed out the structure of this poem! Personally, I think it would be much better if it flowed in a more legato way because I think ...

Hello! I really liked the majority of this poem. You tell it with the air of a storyteller, yet with the rhythm of a poet, which means it all ties ...

Hello! Now, what I immediately noticed in the first stanza was that you have rather a lot of questions! So, once you've asked those questions in the poem, why don't ...

Hey Jas! I don't think I've really read much of your poetry before, but the style of it really intrigued me. It was lovely. The beginning, for me, was the ...