AquaMarine

Hey there! Sorry this is a little late. I quite liked this. So far I'm not too sure what is going on, but I want to know, which is good! ...

Hey there! A haiku, huh? Awesome. I like the topic choice here, it's nice. Especially if you manage to make it poetic. However, there are a couple of points I ...

Hey Ben! Sorry this is a little late. I do always like the topics of your rants. :D But, you know, there are a few things I need to point ...

Hey Fire! Sorry this is a little late. :) I actually really enjoyed this. One thing I love is your subject choice, so thumbs up on that. Just a couple ...

Hello! Yet they retracted, skin pulling taunt I think you mean taut. Ok, so this poem sounds nice. It flows well and it has a nice style and vocabulary. However, ...

Hey there! Sorry this is a little late. A lot of people have pointed out some great points here, so I'll just give you a quick review. Firstly, I like ...

Hey there, here as requested! I can't really find too much wrong with this, actually. I like the idea you have here, and you've created a really engaging chapter. One ...

Hey there, here as requested! On first thoughts, I'm afraid I have to agree with the reviewers above. The driving point of a script should really be the dialogue, whereas ...

Hey there! This is an interesting piece, really. It's original, and you have a nice style of writing. However, I still find myself slightly iffy about it. You do have ...

Hey Hero, here as requested. Ok, so I think that this needs a lot of work. I'll go through a couple of points with you. One problem I really had ...

Hey Rosey! I actually really like this. The way you've written it flows in a way that seems to incorporate the idea of rest by flowing sort of slowly. So ...

Hey Skl! Just a quick review here, really. I enjoyed this poem a lot; the rhyme scheme really works within it and adds to the great rhythm you've got going ...

Hey Kyllorac! I absolutely love the fact that you've done a Villanelle. I've never tried one myself, and don't know a lot about them, but it's written in a lovely ...

Hey there! Here as requested. Initial Thoughts: I thought this was good, actually! I quite enjoyed it. However, there are some things I think you need to address which I'll ...

Hey JD! I'm so happy that you're writing again. :) Getting past writer's block is very good. And this is a lovely subject for a poem, actually. The questions you ...