Anwesha

That was really nice. Especially, the ending was very sweet. Some of the small letter at the beginning of a line seemed a bit "wrong", though. The use of commas ...

Gosh!! That was scary! :-o But very imaginative and expressive. And as you said, "graphical". The metaphor of the lioness was attractive, indeed. I found the title very unique and ...

Waow! Captivating. :-) A couple of corrections- It's written "may paintings" where it should be "many". If you've used "End", you should have used "beginning" in place of "begin. Your ...

That was Dramatic! :-D Really nice and touching. The metaphors were well used. The feelings were well expressed. Even the selection of words were good. The last line's sounding a ...

Now, that was some poetry!! Awesome!I especially liked the comparison with angels. :-) The descriptions were lovely which made the poem all the more beautiful. Just one thing I had ...

Very true. I totally agree with you. But then, I've always felt that the use of some attractive words, while speaking or writing, is always impressive. They add a kind ...

Lovely! There was such a lot of emotion in the poem, it genuinely moved me. That pain, that care, that sorrow, everything was brought about so naturally, fluently. It seemed ...

This was very touching. There was something in it that could penetrate into the readers feelings and leave behind a sense of hope and satisfaction, as if somethings are better ...

That was so nice. :-) It was tragic, no doubt, but even then it seemed as if there is still some kind of hope, a wish, a desire. A kind ...

Amazing. The kind of feeling which you have expressed here is usually quite difficult to put into words. I am saying this because I have experienced it, too. But, you've ...

That was really nice and sweet. Even I love to sing so I can relate quite well with you words and whatever you said is perfectly correct. Music definitely is ...

Now, that was good. The way you put the conversation into the poem was really very nicely done. It added a more realistic and practical, meaningful touch to the poem. ...

I really liked that. Especially the way you described what "changing" actually means. This kind of things keep happening, you know. BFF's seldom last forever. I myself lost a friend ...

That was lovely, dear. It was so poetic, I actually could hear music playing with it. The feel of the lyrics is so touching, I'd love to hear someone(you, of ...

Your poem was really good. Just one thing I'd like to mention is that, the rhyme scheme could have been better. Maybe you had no intention to rhyme but in ...