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AntonioRivera

  • Short Story » Romantic, Other Re: A Love Out of Time

    I find it difficult for me to read stories when they aren't in the right format. I really want to read this, so hopefully you can fix it in the ...

    Dec 14, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: If I wanted to...

    As others are saying, the poem is great. I'd only like to point out (as previously said) that the meaning wasn't very relatable. I want to feel like I'm involved ...

    Dec 14, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: peter

    I feel like there's a deep meaning here, it just isn't communicated as well as I'd like it to be. I am going to assume that your style is the ...

    Dec 14, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The story of him and I

    I do not know where you write your poems, but I recommend Google Drive, or MS Word. It's a meaningful poem of sorts, but it is sloppy which isn't demeaning, ...

    Dec 14, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: The Kiss of my Life

    I'm not sure how old you are, but this poem seemed a bit middle grade. Not to be rude, I would never say harsh things about anyone's writing. First, let ...

    Dec 14, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I would if I could, but I can't so I won't

    I write short stories more than I do poetry, but when I come upon a good poem, I am obligated to review it. There's nothing I like more than being ...

    Dec 13, 2012


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