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Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse
I love Edward so hate New Moon and Jacob Black. :evil: Twilight is not the best written series but addictive nonetheless. And, why did she have to release the first ...
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: One Pure Thought
New Year's Eve. We had avoided each other all night. I stood at the other end of the party, biting at the air, trying to stay calm. In my head ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: I Dare You
I Dare You “Aaarrrggghhhh! Get out of my room!” Donya Allen screamed at her younger brother, Gregory. She grabbed him by the back of his shirt, pushed him out of ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Elemental Dragons - Prologue and Chapter 1
Basically everything has been said by Pawprint and Spazztardchild. There are a few things I would like to mention. Firstly, you tell us too much. I know that sounds odd ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: A Penny for Your Thoughts...
Odd, I hate poetry but love this. It's so wrong to call this a critique but honestly, loved it. I am jealous too of course. Your ability to rhyme surpasses ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Which one
The hammer slammed onto the table in slow motion. Huh? Is she seeing it in slow motion or is it actually in slow motion? BAM echoed through out the cold, ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Ramblings Chapter 1
Where did ‘existence’ come from? Scientists believe that the universe grows each year. This has led them to believe that at some point in time, there was nothing. Nothing existed. ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Twilight
Really good. I liked it. I found it strange how at the beginning your dialogue wasn't correct but then it was at the end. A soft knock at the door ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Speechless
Ah, I like this. I never thought I would find a story that made me feel sympathy for a bed! :shock: Firstly, I have to agree with Raimunda about the ...
Jun 11, 2008
