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Re: Outer Space
Well that was great! I loved the emotions depicted. The shooting stars thing added to the romance. The line- Hand in hand has got much potential in it. I liked ...
May 18, 2014 -
Re: Young Truth
That was really amazing. I liked reading it. Its engaging and interesting. The last sentence was captivating. I really appreciate the way you have expressed the innocence and honesty of ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Tears are like Rain
Hey thegirlwhowrites! The poem was really amazing. I loved the way you expressed your thoughts. The similie you used was very apt. I would say you must write more poems. ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: I wanted to be Cinderella.
Hey retrodisco666! Your poem is packed with emotion. I enjoyed reading it. The way you described a child's dream to be cinderella is worth praising. Keep writing. I would love ...
May 6, 2014
