Annapurna

Thanks, that helps :)

Which lines were confusing and I will work on them?

Thank you :) I dont know why this never got reviewed... I think something technical went wrong :\ I'm so glad you were able to understand the metaphor of the ...

Thanks Tuesday :) In response to your question, what would be done is the affair between Hades and this rival woman, also Persephone's rage would climax in the result of ...

Thanks for the feedback Lupin, that's very helpful :) I'll definitely reconsider the 'drowning' imagine, I'm glad you were able to really understand it! Thanks again

Thank you Aley I appreciate the feedback and will definitely take into account your points next time :)

Thank you! It's amazing to see your work connect with people and I really appreciate it :) thanks again!

thanks :)

Thank you :) The dog is Snowy from Tintin :)

Thanks Tiffany! :) yeah I did draw it, I'm really happy you like it :)

Thank you I'm very happy you liked it :) The punctuation does need work so I'll improve that! :)

Thank you so much for the feedback! :) You were right about the lovers, that they are torn apart by death but not voluntarily, it was inevitable. I'll work on ...

I'm sorry if the poem doesn't appear in separate stanzas, something isn't working properly with my publishing settings. The stanzas break after "longed for" , "ghosts to fight" , "butterfly ...

Hi Judas, thanks a lot for the feedback! I agree, it is rather confusing from the readers perspective but as it was a dream I wasn't sure if I should ...

Thanks a lot, I appreciate the feedback! I'll definitely work on the plot, its just there's a limit to how much I can write, also I'll add more information at ...