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Re: Accidental Servant: Chapter 2
Thank you! I was a bit worried.
Jul 24, 2016 -
Re: Circus Monster: Prologue
I greatly appreciate your review, I went back and made the changes you mentioned. I guess when you read the same chapter over and over again you unintentionally skim and ...
Jul 13, 2016 -
Re: Accidental Servant: Chapter 1
You have no idea what this comment means to me! I've always found it hard for me to portray humor others would get (I have a sense of dry sadistic ...
Jul 12, 2016 -
Re: I'm So So Sorry
Well then you're most welcome. Keep writing, you've got a talent.
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: The Dark
As someone who struggles with anxiety and depression, I can relate to this a lot. The way you use darkness as a double-edged sword and the execution makes it a ...
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: Accidental Servant: Chapter 1
Thank you!
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: Accidental Servant: Chapter 1
Yeah, I'm trying to work on that. Hopefully when I go through it again I can redo some of his thoughts and fix his voice.
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: Serena and the Apocalypse (Part one)
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Jul 11, 2016
There were a few moments where you switched from third to first person, but other than that it's a great concept. Seeing a zombie apacolypse in the 60's is different ... -
Re: Serena and the Apocalypse (Part one)
There were a few moments where you switched from third to first person, but other than that it's a great concept. Seeing a zombie apacolypse in the 60's is different ...
Jul 11, 2016