AnnaBlue

Wow. Just...wow. In a good way, of course. You do an excellent job of pulling the reader along with Shira's own emotional roller coaster. My own thoughts fluctuated with hers, ...

A short but very touching story. You build your way up to the point, and once you reach it you drive it right in. The woman with the luggage making ...

And interesting progression of events. It starts off seemingly predictable, but you catch the reader by surprise by twisting the ending into something dark instead of happy, which is what ...