Angrynoodles

Thanks, I like your username too. It has a nice ring to it. I can work on that, thanks you for the advice.

Thanks, I will work on that

Yeah sure. I just sat down and wrote it in like 30 minutes so I did not really think of where I am going to take the story, but I ...

You're welcome. Sorry, my reply had some spelling errors that I didn't notice.

Hamato is the antagonist so He is supposed to be hated. Jonah's jokes are supposed to make you think "Omg... that was so bad". But because the whole book isn't ...