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Re: Crew Member's Log
Hey Rygel, :D. Firstly, I really like the way this post was in the form of a Log entry. I liked your characters voice, and the story sucked you in. ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: Daughter of Snow White
I'm sorry that this is so late! :( I really liked this story, at first when i saw it, I groaned internally because the layout looked jumbled but when i ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Untitled.
I really like this it had a good beginning. I would have just liked it a bit more if there was more of a space between each sentence because it ...
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: The day YWS stood still.
Oh My! I'm famous!! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant:
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: Daughter of the Underworld-Prologue and First chapter(Draft)
Scar! I love this. You MC is great.... :D :D :D :D Some bits really cracked me up. Write more, :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant:
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: School
Cool Poem. Reminds me of how cool primary school was. :D :D
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: deleted
I really like this poem. The bit where he wants to be able to roam free instead of being well groomed. Is my favorite bit. :D I'm not a poetry ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 9
I've been reading this for a while now and never actually got around to reviewing, so.... Firstly I love this story. It really hooks you so bad, that you can't ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Darkness II
I really got the imagery for this poem. I love it :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant:
Mar 19, 2010