Angels-Symphony

Hey Hawkie ^^ I'll be your reviewer this evening. Their love was all a put-on. We didn't need their lilies* and red lips ; passion and kisses and words ; ...

Welcome to YWS Master ^^ I'm Shina and I'll be your reviewer this evening. First things first, your title. "During" is spelled with one r xD Faster and faster , ...

Hey Moo ^^ I'll be your reviewer this evening. Avynn seemed even more alive in its last hours. I like this beginning. I haven't seen an approach lie this often, ...

Hey Lisa ^^ Welcome to YWS. I'm Shina, and I'll be your reviewer this evening. “Carnelian!!!” it was Da. He was angry again. Be careful when you start a story ...

Hey June ^^ I'm training myself to be an instructor, so I thought I'd come by and see one of the pro's work xD It was ugly; but at that ...

Hi Cynara ^^ I'm Shina, and I will be your reviewer this evening ;) I knew we should have never come here. It had bad idea written all over the ...

It was all over now. This beginning was good. It's not much of a hook, but at least it gets the readers into the story. The war’s daunting cry lead ...

This seems like an interesting story ^^ But now, you need style and skill ;) I agree with Fortuna, you need to fix your descriptions. They're good, but the actions ...

Hey Whisperer ^^ Hey! You're Filipino! Like me xD I'm Shina, btw. Nice to see you like writing now ^^ But have no fear! YWS is here! We'll make you ...

I know you have a lot of stories blooming in your head, KJ, but really, at this rate, your stories won't be finished until you're in a retirement home. You ...

:O It's amazing how many stories you've got in your portfolio. I just wish you'd continue on with a story =_= Make a list of stories you'd like to write ...

*_* This story was amazing! The only downside to this is that there's only one chapter :( Knight is definitely the type of character I'd like to read about, the ...

Emma! Like I've said, and many other people have said, you're a great writer. But there is one thing you need to work on. The plot is too good, and ...

Emma ^^ You're an amazing writer, and this plot is definitely one of those "I must read more" kind. The only writing/plot flaw I've found while reading the whole story ...

Hey Emma Jane ^^ Shina here ;P And I'll be your reviewer this evening. I'll do my best aside from the fact dinner is almost on the table xD The ...