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Re: Tears of an Angel
This is a beautiful poem. I loved it. I just found that it was a bit hard to read with all commas and no fullstops. Also, separating it into stanzas ...
Feb 21, 2012 -
Re: The Pocket Watch
Hey there! This is great! I love the way you've related this to Alice in Wonderland. You've balanced between the dialogue and description and it's a great read. Also, I ...
Feb 20, 2012 -
Re: So far away EDITED VERSION!
It's good! :D Your welcome. Just one thing I found.. I returned the smile of pity as I sat down at the table with two plates on it, toast. “I’m ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Cracked Mask
I love this poem too much critique it! I love the main idea behind it and the way you've presented it. Rhymes are fine. The title was the thing that ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: Little Bird
Awesome poem Adrianna! No mistakes as far as i can see! :D Keep writing!
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: Hope
Can someone help me with the name? I'm stuck. :(
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: King of the Meadow
It's an awesome poem! Just a few punctuation errors though... - Angelreader77
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Just Trying...
Such an awesome poem based on an awesome concept! :D
Sep 15, 2011